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when you go down
go down deep into the sea
so nobody else can find you but me
and when you rise
rise high that clouds can't surround you
and shine bright
that no one can stare at you
go down deep into the sea
so nobody else can find you but me
and when you rise
rise high that clouds can't surround you
and shine bright
that no one can stare at you
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i let a male friend read this and he thought it was about horniness
but no, it's not. hahaha. i can promise you that.
but no, it's not. hahaha. i can promise you that.
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It's clearly not about that - the going down and rising so high are definately something else. I like the open-ended unfinished quality that invites the reader to really consider all the things this poem could describe 
great!
great!